The only way
we
will be
the same
at the last
will be
to go home
and sleep.
We
must not
make the maquette.
The only way
we
will be
the same
at the last
will be
to go home
and sleep.
We
must not
make the maquette.
Jack Ridl is an American poet and former professor of English at Hope College. He is the author of several collections of poetry, has published more than 300 poems in journals, and has work included in numerous anthologies.
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I am eager to sit with this poem for awhile, breathe it in. Maquette is a new word for me. The important one for me is “sleep” and what it could mean… thank you Jack.
I agree! As always, such decision-making regarding each word choice, placement, sound, juxtaposition, and spacing. Masterful and beautiful, Jack!!! So spare and yet so full of meaning. Thank you!
My many thanks, Annie and Beth!
Jack